Monday, April 23, 2012

The Fun I Have



Coins here, today I will talk about a poem I made yesterday. Poems are things that you write to show people how you feel! The poem I wrote is about me at the beach. This is what I wrote:

Sea Love
By: Coins
I stand there watching silently, at the beautiful sea
Where the animals are playing happily

There the foam
Makes me feel at home

Then the waves rose, speeder than a fly
Making shells leave, faster than they can say goodbye

The smell of the salt water is better than the rest
As long as it’s at sea, believe me it’s no pest!

1 comment:

  1. Briana (Coins Friend)April 28, 2012 at 7:32 AM

    I think this poem is beautiful!
    -Briana

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